Memories..

The jaded pages bring in memories..
every moment a revelation..
I wish I could go back in time..
to the fragments of broken perfection..

Reviews

[Mary Fioratti]

The fragments of broken perfection are the learning...an they are just so needed. You wrote: "Every moment a revelation"... that is true... and the revelation can be "bad" or "good", one delight us... another teach us....
Your poem is short, but so intense!
*Mary*

[shruthi]

What a nice writing,it is really good

[An owl on the moon]

Your words move like music... a soft dancing dream across time... looking back and longing for what once was... each page a reflection glimmering in the shaded past... How beautiful and bittersweet... Amazing write!

[Priya]

This is a deliciously short slice of nostalgia. Quite coincidental that my thoughts have been nostalgic for a few hours :)

[sarah]

If only we could forget people say memories are a good thing but I find it to be a pain reminder of what once was and will never be again. Great write I love this!

[Siddhartha]

Yes you can Arabdha. With an unfettered mind and a poet's pen, you can make the past come alive and suddenly the universe will seem full of colors, music and magic.

[Zeo Writer]

Its like every line you wrote about me..lol I loved it!!!

[cartera]

Even a broken perfection is preferable. as you suggest, to the jaded life that yearns to go back.
ATB
Alex.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

most definitely, wonderful thoughts penned so well...........

[misha]

"To the fragments of broken perfection" Oh how this line makes me shiver. This is amazing. I love the simplicity of it. Great job!

[freelancejouster]

so much said in so few words