Caring

Short triquain about love :)

I used to not

care about anything.

Then I met you and everything changed.

And I hate you for it. I was content before,

without emotion. Without caring

rather I lived or died.

Now I do.

But it hurts,

This constant ache in me

No one ever tells how much love hurts.

And I do you love you. But loving you hurts so bad.

Physically hurts it's so damn intense. 

Because caring hurts worse

than all else.

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

It's difficult to shut it all out..you're gonna hurt..because you are alive.
Enjoyed the anguish in your humanness ...
Well done.

[Arabella Song]

Thanks so much for your kind words

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.....

[zainul]

Caring and ignoring are vital in our lives.
Nicely portrayed the role caring.
Thanks for sharing.

[Emily]

I like the meaning of this poem! Good Job!

[Sami Khalil]

"love hurts.

And I do you love you. But loving you hurts so bad.

Physically hurts it's so damn intense.

Because caring hurts worse

than all else."

Emotions are intense. Love is painful hence...Bravo......

[Arabella Song]

Oh, thanks so much! :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[abluehorseandflowers]

Very nice. And I simply adore your form, like the ebb and flow of the feeling of love. Kudos.

[Arabella Song]

Aww, thanks! :D I appreciate the comment lots ^_^

[abluehorseandflowers]

The pleasure is mine :)