Bleeding Heart............

pain inside me.................

My heart is bleeding,

but this world is still sleeping as if it doesn't care....

There is a deep pain in my heart...

My heart bleeds to see people killing each other over small things....

My heart bleeds to see children working as slaves for filling their empty belly....

My heart bleeds to see animals being killed for profits...

My heart bleeds to see girls crying for the injustice done to them by society...

My heart bleeds to see baby girls being killed in the name of tradition...

There is a deep pain in my heart...

but do anyone care????

My heart is bleeding,

but this  world is still sleeping  as if it doesn't care....

 

Reviews

[Jujubee_:]]

Yes! Most definitely! Our society nowadays is just... Terrible. It must change or else all will fall under chaos. Great write. Ver overpowering. I enjoyed it.

[heart_breaker]

you are right.. our society needs to change... we must care about others.... 'cause we belong to one race i.e. human.....

[Blackcat]

this one is really toching... you are right this world needs to change for good....

[Mystic]

you are right.. nobody cares about others... people are so busy in their life that they even neglect themselves.. how can you expect them to care about you.... this poem is really good..... You have so nicely shown todays life...

[Dead_End]

seems like you are social reformer... Just like you, Your heart is also very beautiful. Otherwise who bothers about others?????

[Satellite Heart]

I agree completly. Society itself in a monster. I loved this poem. Great Work!

[James Paulin]

This poem cries out for social justice in general but much is better in the world. More needs to be done and your heart is in the right place. The poem could have come from a prophet pleading for the victims of evil. Well written.

[*~Kristy~*]

This world is seriously screwed up. It's like every time we try to be happy, it finds a new way to f**k up whatever it is that makes us happy...

[amandamercer`xo]

this poem is sad, but very true.
very well written, good job.

[Sylla Rege'ne]

Sad truth of the world. The ones that want to help and feel sympathy are the ones that are the most ignored. I enjoy the almost fresh cliche of this poem. Its really great! 10/10