Trip

Remote road to look forward to,
A small stick points to your virtue,
You wrote your name in a tale,
Deep moral it must entail,
As atoms plunge into chaos,
Hot breath connects you to cosmos.
Sinking soul lifts up afloat,
For whom sails etheric boat.
Wavy trip steering right from wrong,
Reaching with conviction held strong,
Assuring fairies roam there,
The journey ends with their care.

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A super poem with fine word choice wow! Awesomely rhymed and i liked esp the conviction and steering lines. Fab muse.!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, "Dandy randy Tom cat."

[Archishman Rick]

Thank you so much for your positive review!!
I shall definitely read and review your new poem :)