Victoria

Victoria tis nice.

Very few can hope so much

Immersing in that very touch

Cradling gently in thy arms

Two little loves with open qualms

Once upon that ray of faith

Ringing on that pretty face

Into hearts and flowers grow

A love of hope and wind of snow.

Victoria

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Once upon that ray of faith
Ringing on that pretty face.......these lines're pretty good, but who's victoria, is she victoria queen about you're writin'...lol,
by the way lovely words, loved your writin' too...

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Hey you should be writing more poems... This is the second one that i have read but i must say you have potential to be a good poet...... This left a smile and my face...
Thanx for that!

[Akshat♥]

Simple & love-able write:)
keep writing!!

[Alana McGuire]

Your word usage here is very captivating and pretty. I like it. :)