Daywatchers

Anxious yellow Soldiers

With green epaulets

Stand alert

Our silent garden sentinels

Gazing ever upward

To search The Heavens

For Sage or Savior

With one wide eye.

Author's Note

Just your garden-variety poem.

Please offer any thoughts....

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

Hey, I like it. Buddhist precepts prohibit monks from destroying plants because other life forms depend on it. Bit you didn't want to hear that. :)

Anyways, I like the imagery here. It's superb and surreal. So what's the lesser of the sage? Is it not a student? Dosnt the disciple surpass the master always? However, I speak in paradigms. Forgive me.

Anyways, great work amiga :)

[Ivy]

Thanks, amigo-san! You always have fun tidbits to share. :)
And to ponder: perhaps it is true that the master and student play interchangeable roles to each other?

[jesserose99]

so descriptive of our lovely sunflowers. Light and airy...your poem is like a flower petal that resides on the subject you write about!

[Ivy]

Thank you very much for your kind review!