You Will Never Love Me

The agony of realizing something as cruel as this is very...agonizing.

You Will Never Love Me

 

Always knew it was coming,

Just didn't know it'd be so soon,

You're gone from my life, maybe forever,

Like the star have suddenly deserted the moon.

 

I think I read too many books,

Of charming princes and happy endings,

Should have thought to read the others too,

Of cruel betrayals and sullen pretendings.

 

It hurts inside but I can't imagine,

A life without your twinkling eyes,

It's hard to think you're gone for good,

Like you and I have severed ties.

 

You will never love me,

And I'll never get over this,

That you will never love me,

And it's you I'll forever miss.

Reviews

[Lexi I.]

Hi Areeba!

Great job on this piece. I could relate to most of it, as I'm sure most people can!

On another note, in case you want to make some minor changes, here are some things I noticed:
In the line, "Like the star have suddenly deserted the moon."
It would work to say, "Like a star suddenly deserting the moon."

In the next stanza, "crule" should be "cruel"
And when you use "Its" --it should be "It's"--as in It is.
(I am assuming English is your second language and these are just minor changes...)

[Areeba]

You assumed right, thanks for pointing out my mistakes!