Life

LIFE

As I grow up everything changes,

and if things go wrong do I have to rearrange?

What Is life to us?

Why does everyone make a fuss?

Why can't they just live their life?

You don't have to get a knife to know if someone 

loves you or miss you if you die!

Life is not fair, and when you pray,

your questions were never answered.

You blame your God and start to wonder;

Why do I believe in you?

The skies are blue, but why can't I see you?

God is in you, just wait for the answers.

No need to rush, because somewhere in God's Heart,

Your God - will welcome you in anytime your ready to Depart!

by: AL

Author's Note

This time I don't know if the dialogue is good, so what do you think of the dialogue? How do you Like it? Is it worth reading for?

Thank you,

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I love the Dialogue! I Think it's fantastic and still has a great flow to the poem!
I could relate to this in so many ways!
This was an awesome and enjoyable read!
This relates to my story The Blonde Girl. If you could read it, it would mean a lot to me!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Arianne Lomocso]

Thank you very much Lee :) and Yes I will read yours.

[Misery]

Yes, your poem is worth reading. It speaks of sadness, but it is truthful. Keep sharing your inspirations about life, dear poet, and the dialogue will fall into place for you.