Famous Last Words

This piece was written at a very bad time in my life. It was actually meant to be a suicide note. Leave it to me, to write a poem as a suicide note....

 

There I've done it again and

although it's nothing new,

this time I've succeeded in

what I came to do.

These are my famous last words.

Go ahead and say I wasn't strong.

It won't be remembered for long

and no one really cares when you're gone.

I guess it's a confession of sorts.

A confession of a fool.

I probably should have known all along,

that life is too good to be true.

Say what you want about me,

I can't hear you anyways.

Don't put on the act for others,

everyone can see the relief on your face.

These are my famous last words.

The words of a fool,

But I won't be remembered for long,

and no one gives a s**t when you're gone.

©3-12-2014 By Ashley Nicole Nordyke

Reviews

[wordman]

all poets visit here from time to time,it will pass,you wrote a great write

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Oh this was last year, so I've passed.. Lol. But thank you!

[cassandra ziemba]

oh, please don't ashley. you are an amazing person and i know a lot of people would miss you. you are really cool and kind, you are not a fool. i would not be relieved if you died, you would be dearly missed, so please dont.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you Cassie.. Yeah I was just at a bad point in my life..

[cassandra ziemba]

well you got through it, that's what counts! :)

[Cool Girl]

Oh, Ashley...
This is so emotional.
Please promise me you won't try to kill yourself again.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I can try to promise... I'm not afraid of dying but I don't want to go through the last experience again!

[Cool Girl]

Great! I'd hate to see my twin go..

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I don't plan on going anywhere. I have to stick around for Tessa, My mum & Dad, my other sister & brother, you, Izzy, & a bunch of other people I don't have the patience to list,. LOL

[Cool Girl]

Lol
Very true..
I'm glad, Ashley :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

:) Happy happy.. lol

[Cool Girl]

Lol..........