Love

You caught my mistakes when

They threw me down 

You caught my heart

When it felt to the ground

But why didn’t you catch the love that

Cause the burn

now the love is fading away

Author's Note

SIMPLE

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Ach, sometimes we can't even see these things until it is toooo late. It is just how we are. Simple :)))

[koty bell]

great poem nice job:)

[rosemary keogh]

Has great meaning. Nice job.

[Ariana]

thank you guys are very helpful it was my first poem ever hehe i made it in less than a minute hehehe

[Missy Moooooo]

It is simple yet powerful,
nice write. I liked it.

[Matthew Smith]

I agree. Simple.

[Molly]

this is not simple! its powerful! nice!
consider reviewing some of my stuff? id be honored

[The XYZ Writer]

Those few words held a lot of meaning in them. Makes me wonder. Great poem!!

[Beverly Jane]

Just cause it's short, doesn't mean it's simple. It can the most shortest poem the world but, still have the most meaning in the world. Good job, keep writing. :)

[Maddie:]]

some people might say this is too short, but i think its a perfect size! left me intrigued and wondering! beautifully written, nice job!:]