Overcome

An old piece I wrote a while back and revised :)

Memories we attain through experiences we face,

A lovely appearance we embrace,

As tears descend on every place.

Tell me, have you ever been in love?

Have lost a love one?

Have ever felt alone?

Even when another is by your side?

We’re still at the age of discovery,

With days and years ahead.

Let’s continue to walk this bumpy road

Till it’s completely Overcome.

Reviews

[Dan]

bumpy roads will never end so the fun fact is that it won't be overcome , a never ending cycle of fun and pain is life in short , nice job portraying such an image I like it

[Arline]

Thank you for your kind review :)

[MsJewel]

Yes, it is a bumpy road, but it's those bumps and unexpected curves that bring excitement! Love your poem.

:) Julie

[Arline]

Thank you so much for your kind review: ) I appreciate it greatly XD Love ya work!