FOXP2

Random thoughts from a review and what I was reading today, genetics, it�s astonishing how one small error can strip something so specific.

 

Choked through a brutal birth canal,

We come our appendages torn off

generation after generation.

Leaving nothing to pluck like

petals with feelings at the roots,

blazing stamen sunsets on stems.

Moths wakening in darkness,

Pixy dust, dazzling moot tones

that hides away the utter plainness.

Inner depilatory dialogues stiffed

To strip away remaining humanity

naked and clothed all at once,

shivering and helpless.

Reviews

[vanishing]

You write in One of my favorite styles.
every word combination creates a specific emotion
and image-in context to metaphor

which opens the writing in many directions
to be pondered-I meen this writing speaks on many levels
in building sequence how a true wordsmith
would write The over all feeling is a sense of awareness
insightfully knowledgeable

Thanks for sharing such works to edify the mind.

[kurrupted]

short, powerful ,multi-facet and thought provoking...let me keep it short "double thmbs up"

[Amanda]

this seems to be the 'way' of the world nowadays and it isn't right. i am not sure how to elaborate on this because it can go in so many directions. the imagery was great and it provoked some deep thinking on my part.
a great write, as usual.

Always,

Amanda