Watching Me...

I don't know, what I'm doing now.

I've lost my way, somehow.

Tears are not allowed.

I must stand proud.

 

Someone must lead.

They asked it of me.

Can I really be...

What they need?

 

What to do,

That I ask you.

Please give a clue,

This is all too new...

 

Battle's tide flows,

Brave souls know.

Many soldiers go,

To defeat their foe.

  

Till they give in,

The war will not end.

In time this land will mend,

And my words they will send.

 

To complete our test,

I will do my best.

My soul shant rest,

Till I fix this mess.

Reviews

[Spirit_Raven101]

I really liked this poem, its inspiring and i like how it is about determination. its a really grate work of art :3

[Arrinae]

Most of what I write is about determination and perserverance. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[~Nina~]

An inspirational poem about determination. Great work!

[Arrinae]

Thank you!