Would You?

What would you say,

To those who set your fate,

If there were a way,

To change the cards you've been dealt?

Would you really change your fate,

Despite the price you'll pay,

To escape the hate,

If only for a little while?

Would you give another's life,

To alter your destiny,

Regardless of the strife,

That is sure to follow?

Reviews

[Marie]

I like it because it is short and sweet. Some of the best poets can use the fewest words and evoke all kind of thoughts in the readers mind. These kind of poems make you think and ask yourself questions. I think that is the best kind. Keep on writing!

[Arrinae]

I am glad you think so! I've always liked poems that make you think, though my personal favorite type of poetry are the ones that tell a tale.