My fire

love is dangerous

Fire inside craving for your heaven air.
Distance between makes the flame hard to bare.
Will it die, will it live.
The decision is for you to give. 
Rushing fire threatening to destroy.
My all good godess Helen of Troy.
Flames who left me with a scar.
 My heart has beaten the rythm of war. 
Enlightment tears have fallen for. 
Taught me to love without gore. 
So let me shine my warm colors.

For my love is without horrors.

Author's Note

Feel it, friends of the flame, feel it!

Reviews

[sonnie ibadah]

The rythm is amazing! Simple and neat. The last line captures everything. Beautiful piece!

[Arthur Aadams]

thank you!!