Walking Corpse

A man with no creativity; self-confidence; courage and altruistic.

when life values nothing;

barren; the mind behaves;

It's hell; the heart is cold;

never feels the true colors;

moving on this earth;

as Walking corpse!

Reviews

[Marie]

A cold heart is blocked and may just as well be dead, because though alive it is dead. Its doors never open to welcome anybody in. It becomes cruel, bitter, resentful and unloving. Very thought provoking write, T. P... SO much said in so few words. Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Welcome always, T. P...

[Lydia Shutter]

Dismal and dark, but certainly well written. Lydi**

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I see the empty carcas of a man bereft of any empathy in this punchy piece.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[jacob erin-cilberto]

third line I think you meant "it's" for it is.
This is such a hard-hitting short piece.
when the mind rules us and the heart takes a back seat...we are in trouble.
No feelings, no empathy, no love....just motion.
j.

[Arundass TP]

thank you friend, i will edit the typing error committed.