Vivid memories

Sometimes memories haunts

Before the sun is on
Windows are well opened
To see the owls widened eyes
From the near by woods.

Expecting call of wood owls
Stand still, as the clock ticks advances
Memories flipped the pages
Marking pages with colorful inks.

Darkness was a story of past
The rulers of the night are forbidden
Never heard the music of night
Just those screeching sounds stay as memories.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Oh how their screams etch their presence into our minds. Whipped away in the maddening sound. Great write.

With love,

Matthew

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[red93]

Nice Work, well thought out and put together. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Weeping willow]

Nicely expressed piece, loved the flow of words ;-}

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[Seriana]

I like this. The first line, "before the sun is on" paused me. But that's really what is going on, all these memories in the dark, or darkness in the memories. Lovely to read someone new. Thank you!

[Arundass TP]

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[Neville]

for the time being, I don't need such memories, I am surrounded by the haunting and hunting sounds made by these wonderful masters of night sky each night .. I find their presence reassuring .. maybe one day, if I should move from my little oasis of green they will become treasured memories .. I am glad I found myself here .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

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[Fran Marie]

A well crafted poem with
Vivid imagery in well chosen words
within the lines ..

[Arundass TP]

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[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

I recently moved to a farm and have a huge white owl living In A tree. They are amazing. Great poem

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[Perdition]

Absolutely love that opening line. I read this one several times trying to find a rhythm that would match the feeling and just like mine, well, sometimes you have to go with what is there and listen to the screeching...what waits for us in darkness is not always what you want the windows wide open to, but praise for knowing your woods. And just so long as it isn't the "whipperwill"..lol. That is one creature that'll drive you insane! Enjoyed it~

[Arundass TP]

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[NormaZ]

I loved the lyrical quality of your lovely phases, and your imagery. Very nice!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

I heard the hoot of the night owl here. I have always found that reassuring. This poem is visually beautiful, as well as haunting. Lovely poem Arundass.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊 sure, Owls are majestic birds.