Rattles

"The Rattler" "It's warning" "The last warning"

Rattlers rattles with melodious voice
Hoping a dream mysterious
The canines are sharp and shiny
Showing death in a mirror

Deafness may not be the reason
To fear or not to fear
The path is darkness and wild
Where lantern's close their eyes

Life is just an offer
Skipping the mirror too clear
Never the sunsets in the mid day
If you walk far away too fast.

Reviews

[Akinlolu]

What kind of creature chooses the path that is darkness and wild? What terrible (or is it courageous being) embraces the place where lanterns close their eyes? Fantastic.

[Arundass TP]

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[Perdition]

“ where lanterns close their eyes” …been on a few of those paths myself. Enjoyed your fangs!

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[Samuel Dickens]

Some snakes merely hiss, which is hard to hear. Others make no sound at all. But rattlesnakes or their human counterparts make a sound that's unambiguous--slowly move away, then run!

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[Ken Simm.]

Dark and very gothic. Full of atmosphere. I like it.

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[Thomas W Case]

Fantastic work. You make this come to life.

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[Sami Khalil]

Snakes can rattle nerves; some are good and needed, others are poisonous and deadly. Some kiss snakes, others cut their heads.
Thank you friend.

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[Sami Khalil]

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[Marie]

As someone who is totally phobic of snakes, this poem brought out the same reaction as if I had seen a rattle snake in reality. You paint a fearful picture of him for your reader! Excellent depiction! Thank you for sharing, T.P...

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[Soren]

Snakes are one animal that make me a bit nervous this poem has some great lines “ The canines are sharp and shiny showing death in a mirror” Love the poem

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[Brandy]

Oh, my ! I think I'll stay out of its path. Snakes certainly frighten me.
You paint such vivid images with your words.

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[red93]

Very good ATP - you capture the fear of these awesome creatures well ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

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