Dream

It's nothing too long

When dream comes true
Life is happy dancing on the floor
When all dream comes true
Madness swallows forgets this world
When all dream collapses
You pray to God for help
Looks the sky, to see the stars
On a sunny day too hot
Forgetting to rest under a tree
Inhaling it's cool breeze.​

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

all i dreamed was to live in a happy, supportive family but i am now looking to the stars and praying to god.
the first lines of the poem gave me a taste of what i am missing out on. it left an ache in my heart. but the second half reminded me that i am not alone. many of us have unfulfilled dreams or aspirations and carry around a feeling of emptiness, forgetting to rest under a tree. but i vibed with this poem. it is written exceptionally well and possesses wisdom that is not apparent at a first glance.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for encouraging review. Have a nice day 💗

[Pryde Foltz]

We cab get lost in dreams, for better and worse. I think it is as you say. No matter the power of your dreams, always take time to just be. Very meaningful write.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Neville]

There may be much solace found in dreams .. one only need look for the meanings lay hid in them .. I enjoyed my visit here my friend .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Neville]

you are so very welcome .. N 😊👍

[MrBlack202]

A very powerful poem. Nicely written

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I have learn. Make the good days last forever and try to leave behind the bad days. I like the old Irish saying. " I hope you have more good days than bad." Thank you for sharing the amazing poem. Was honest thoughts.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Soren]

Arundas This is a powerful poem with several good lines. It is highly philosophical. Nicely written wisdom falls from it like drops of rain from the sky

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

How true this poem is. We turn more when we are unhappy and troubled to our God. When we are happy, we just live in the moment. We all hope our dreams will come to fruition. Nicely penned Arundass.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

You inspire us.
Check out my latest sonnet please

[Arundass TP]

Yes sure. Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome Arundas.

[red93]

Really good work again ATP, sounds idyllic. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

This poem speaks the truth! When all is going well and we are happy, God does not enter our mind. Only when things are not going well do we turn to God to beg for help! So few ever give thanks for the help they receive, sadly. A very inspiring, insightful poem which tells the reader to enjoy life, but not to forget about his/her God too. Lovely work, dear T. P... Thank you for sharing...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poet...