Mysterious point

Where creation started

That mysterious point
It's beginning, the creative excellence
Spreading arms to all sides, encircled
A blueprint of universe, infinite
Mysteriously collective, pulling
Pushing out to divine horizon
Never existed out of memory
Unless one exists here.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

I would classify this one as a spiritual offering, though its main points are found in many religions. The mysterious point might be called God in some religions, but its description seems to identify it as the source of all being. As the poet notes, it is the blueprint of the universe. A thoughtful piece, this one.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Tremendous.

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend

[Pryde Foltz]

Loving this creative and mystic write. You make me want to pick up a pen and see if muses are with me this evening. Loved this:)

[Arundass TP]

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[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

there is something very esoteric yet exciting here. like taking a class from an old philosophy professor, this work is full of meaning that can not easily be unlocked. i might return to this work another time after thinking about it for a bit. but the last two lines have stuck with me.
Never existed out of memory
Unless one exists here.
what is it, this ineffable thing, something real but not exactly there? i ponder...

[Arundass TP]

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[Chris Shaw]

Creation, much to ponder here Arundass. Indeed a mind boggling exercise. Certainly a mystery which has never been witnessed. Enjoyed this thought provoking poem. All good wishes.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Have a nice day

[Soren]

Literally this poem expresses the beauty of creation of the universe, but may be taken as the creation of our own personal universe. Very nicely written and clothed in beautiful images.

[Arundass TP]

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[Neville]

Extraordinarily mysterious indeed .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

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[MCS]

Well penned; enjoyed the many layers

[Arundass TP]

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