Born as Slave

Born as slave
Under Sun and Moon
I crawl all over
Hearing others voices
Rebelling all voices
I am slave of my own thoughts
So powerful, misleading
Through strange paths
Wishing to see beautiful heaven
Through bitterness!​

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

your bitterness arises from your time as a slave, and it doesn’t disappear immediately: sometimes it takes a life time to realize your suffering…a slave to your own thoughts…..even though bitter, you still wish to open Heaven’s gates… and your bitterness might just fade into nothing…
nice write!
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!!!
Warmly, B

[A.H.]

well written, "I am slave of my own thoughts" , quite a powerful thought. thanks for writing and sharing this.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Wow. Powerful and poignant.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Fia Naturie]

"I am slave of my own thoughts" I feel this a lot. Nicely done

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thoiba]

Wow. That was beautiful. Really resonated with me.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Our emotions can certainly play havoc with our thinking and feeling. Over thinking can be exhausting. Being a slave to our own out of control thoughts isn’t fun.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Sure, Thank you friend 😊

[MCS]

We are all so good at undermining ourselves. Well penned my friend.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Senu Jayasinghe]

So very true. We are our own enemies sometimes. Couldn’t have put this better.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for encouraging review