Life

It's a mystery

Around 2am!
Murmuring sounds
Ears are busy locating
From the roof occurs faintly.

Opened eyes
Found a lady crawling
Like a lizard, rotating head
Bright bluish red eyes staring.

Heart pumped heavily
Laid down in bed like dead man
She was staring and crawling
Through the wall and roof murmuring.

She might not be an angel from heaven
She might not be a vampire sucking blood
She jumped on to bed, laughing
Splitting his soul into tiny pieces.

He floats over the bed
Seeing his dead body, worthless
Staring up towards the roof
Learning how worthless life is!

Floating through air
Searching a body healthy
Craving to live one more life
To see her once more.


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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

And I often ponder reincarnation...and think it is quite possible we have more than one life.
Not sure if I want to hover over someone's bed...but who knows....might be kind of fun to put the fear of God into certain people, just to get them back for transgressions.
This was a nice timeout in my day, thanks....
j.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[schlanks]

Using something as drastic as reincarnation to express the lengths you would go to for someone you maybe shouldn't is very clever. A very imaginative angle made even more fun to explore by your ever unique voice.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Though I don't believe in re-incarnation, I did like this poem...the build up in the content...to finally realize first the worthlessness of life, but then, a re-birth to love life and search for his love....
it made it all worthwhile....
NICE!
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!!
Warmly, B

[Theo Addage]

Did you watch the Exorcist before you went to sleep, after you signed the divorce papers? It reads personally angered and insecure of the future. I think you could clean it up a little, but I do like it. Thank you!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

A take of scary things things after 2 A M.
I was pulling for the victim to be safe.
I hope you did not become traumatized.
I like it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Dylan Macadham]

I chillingly-down-my-spine enjoyed this! :)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Arundass, this has to be a nightmare surely? Your lines certainly come across as scary. Enjoyed the read of this nicely composed poem.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[Soren]

A nightmare per chance? Full of vivid images this poem paints disturbing pictures yet what is scary to one not so to another like beauty it is a subjective thing. Nicely done.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[red93]

Nicely mysterious ATP, with great imaging. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊