Lucky moments

Really lucky

The Bear behind the tree never noticed my presence,
The Lions walking never noticed my presence
The Wild dogs ran fast unnoticed
Elephants passed in front of me unnoticed
Walked over a poisonous snake without touching it's fangs
Scorpions crawled over my legs ran to darkness
Ghosts and vampires skipped my presence
Sitting alone in the darkness silent
Silence is the only powerful weapon I have
To wage war without harming
Felt how lucky I got that weapon.
While Vulture's sat boring on tree top
Roaming and circling around my body
Until time exists.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

You were really lucky... with those beasts running in front of you and never noticing you...wow, you must be some kind of invisible person...or they know how sweet and calm you are and not afraid of them....you describe these beasts in a vivid, thoughtful way.....very clever!
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!!!
Warmly, B

[prema]

You are very lucky from being unnoticed in earth. But from up above the vulture is eyeing you which is inevitable . very nice poem

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[A.H.]

I find this write somewhat satirical. luck is most of the times not on our side and we hope we turn lucky always, but it's not case most times. the lines from the start to end seem to suggest that for me. and yes Silence is a great weapon, it can bring down the biggest of opponents with no words or actions. great thought there. you sort of weave this concept of animals not noticing you all through but at the end vulture do notice your body and keep circling. that's a powerful ending with some food for thought. Thanks for writing and sharing this wonderful write that is thought provoking.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Inkspire]

A fun read!
Silence works wonders when you want to stay unnoticed.
Last line remind us luck isn't always in our side.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Excellent work. I enjoyed it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[John the Baptist]

The last lines seem to indicate the speaker is deceased. Indeed, dead bodies have no fear of being attacked.

[Arundass TP]

Ha, ha, ha... Thank you friend 😊

[ETERNITY]

Honey Pie, Let me tell Ya! I think I could hide from everything EXCEPT GHOSTS and VAMPIRES!
Awesome presentation, friend.

[Arundass TP]

Maybe...Thanks for reviewing

[Soren]

It makes me wonder how many times unknown to me I have escaped death or harm by luck and what are the odds of all this happening. I am aware of several times after the fact. A very thought provoking write my friend.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[red93]

Great Work ATP. Luck is a valuable commodity indeed, and I hope yours never runs out. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

This was very interesting;
I never looked at it this way.
I notice your poetry.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Arundas