Walking over string

It's life

Faces of clown's
Walks over thin string,
Rolling over problem's
Taken from heaven and hell.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A balancing act, I guess.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Arundas

[Dadisha]

Deep and powerful . I love your poem .

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 🙂

[Circe]

Unique portrayal of balance and contrast.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 🙏

[Pete]

delicate and dangerous for sure. nicely said.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes we all know what's behind all that facade... and it is quite sad... a life of pretending isn't fun!
Thanks for sharing
Warmly, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

It is very hard to keep a brave face, a smile, when we are down in the dumps.
"Don't let this smile I wear, make you think that I don't care!" (Smokey Robinson and the Miracles)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. You bring this home.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[MCS]

Sounds like our current world situation. Short and to the point.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

Send in the clowns to distract from life's problems.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome sir.