Uncertainty

Prevailing

When you draw a line, straight
That path is special, inevitable
Touching , binding around
Unknown law inked.

The line is sketched specially
Where deviations are forbidden
Those line ends somewhere
Inside where the goals are blooming.

It's the line leading to final
Destiny where nothing grows
Odd out of dreams nor thoughts
Nothing strange or strangest happens.

There is a crow watching
There is a crow sitting alone
Building a nest of certainty taking
numerous twigs of uncertainty.

The nest lies uncertain on branches
Dreaming certainty, keeping it intact
Until forceful typhoon touches
Defragmenting the nest.

Those lines are drawn sharp and bold
But a drop of tear can wipe it off
Clearing rules of morbid fear
Attached inside heart for long.

Did you feel certainty in uncertainty
Uncertainty in a certain while
Chasing the crow out of your backyard
With hatchless eggs inside that nest.

You are sitting alone
Thinking of hatching eggs
The crow somewhere gone
Motherly feelings, certainty in uncertainty.

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think the uncertainty in life creates the certainty that we will enjoy the surprises...the misunderstandings, the hatching of the eggs that open giving us promises we never knew were made.
The nest is there, so we dare peek into it? We just might fine some really good life surprises...
and doesn't that make our heart fly?

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[red93]

Great Work ATP, and I like how you use the crow as the key motif in this Piece.
Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 🙏

[Neha agrawal]

It feels like the line as destiny where the crow as a keeper of fragile hopes, and the nest as the delicate space between control and chaos.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Sami Khalil]

I'll take a dozen extra large eggs.
You write good philosophy.
Not certain what is inside something until you crack it open with knowledge, understanding and spiritual eyes

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊