Dead Man's wishes

Oh....

Dead man's wishes
Are smoke travelling through air
Disappearing somewhere
Inside the soul gloomy.

Dead man writes a song
Of glory and defeat
On floating water
Disappearing gloomy

Dead man sings a song
Of Love and hate
Turns into ghost
Floating madly like a mist

Dead man sees all around
Through mystic mirror
Lying inside coffin
Laughs madly without sound.

Dead man hears past
Through mystic voice
Blurry story and Curses
Binding soul in pain.

Dead man dreams
For another life
To live happily
Understanding faults in this life.

Dead man loves his wife
After living in this world
Cries, for her loss
Prays for her wishes

Dead man vanishes
Into emptiness
After clock ticks
A trillion trillion trillion times.


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Reviews

[Curly Grace]

A haunting and atmospheric piece. The repeating “Dead man…" structure gives it a steady, ghostlike rhythm, and the imagery feels vivid and dreamlike.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[John the Baptist]

It seems dead man longs for reincarnation. I sincerely hope his next experience is more pleasant than this one has been.

[Arundass TP]

Hmmm.. May be... Thank you friend for a nice review