To Be Announced

Its a poem that is about how two people want to be happy and the only way they can is through death. so its pretty much about mass suicide. how morbid?

We're only shades of black,
Lost in this atrocity,
The variety.
The only shade of black.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

We crossed the line.
Somewhere;
Back a ways.
Well it's too late now.

Our lips tint as if
They were pockets of blood.

 

This may be the last time
We have the chance
Lets show our love
The only way pleasurable

Drink this toxin with me

The ecstacy that fills our cups
Will be worth it.

The world ends anyway,

 Why not enjoy it?
Sweet sorrow rules the day

Let us end this together
The poison in our cups
Please promise;
 We'll end together.

Reviews

[Liam]

Morbid but AWESOME. Well done!

[Staci Brown]

finding solace and security in the perceived darkness of death... nice cameo of one's love in the life of death... so to speak :D

well done :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

PS: i really think you should write some fiction hon! if you do write a story please email me and let me know as i'd love to read what you create! not a read request tho as i tend to over look them, just a quick msg to me letting me know tho... also any new poetry you create i'd love to read as well :D thanks :D

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Great piece..good job...

[Artic the Fallen]

My dear this is amazing. It reminds me of a romeo and juilet type of romance.... except better.

[Cresent_Rose]

BEAUTIFULLY TRAGIC!! I LOVE IT!