Locked in

I'm locked in my own body

 

There's all those feelings, those things I have in me

Powerful things, life-or-death stuff

That no one wants or needs to hear about

but they're there

They're me

No one cares

Yet I can't just ignore them

And Yet I do

 

they're all locked in my body

And I'm the speechless corpse

Reviews

[JC]

you have said what so many writers feel, we feel more, long for more, ache for more out of life...if you begin to let it out in torrents you may be surprised at how it is acceppted and the people you will attract...i always enjoy reading something as real as this.

[AWSklavos]

It sounds like you are a poet who needs to beat out their words and release what is locked in your body. Thank you for sharing this one.

[Distant horizons]

So much said with so few words. Brilliant.

[Luke Ritta]

very good........great work.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow that ending was really quite the exclamation on this brilliantly emotional write.

[deeps]

Powerful emotion you have stated!