Words

It is simply as it is. An old piece written many years ago, up for reviewing only.

 

Diluted

Overthrown

Forgotten

Hated

Killed

Dead

Bleeding

Suffering

Pained

Hurting

Darkened

Blackened

Murdered

Massacred

Mutilated

Lacerated

Mobbed

Thugged

Shot

Done

Homicidal

Suicidal

Depressed

Imperfect

Impaired

Broken

Finished

Insane

Unstable

In short, Issues.

Reviews

[KayOss]

I once wrote a poem like this. Some people will see a list of words, whereas others will see an artistic work that conveys a meaningful message. I lean towards the latter side. I see a work of art. Sometimes less is more and words are all the more powerful for being forced to stand alone. I am glad that you recognized this and that you felt your poem strong enough to stand up to the eyes of other poets. Thanks for sharing.

[Heather Rodwell]

Well... if I were to say those words up there were nothing more than a scrambling of words down one side of a page, I'd be done in for lying and on the way to execution.
Hurt
Fought
Contempt
Situational therapy;
Words.

[John A Common]

Its raw and powerfull. Nice job.

[Blue Cavalla]

Unrelenting. I like how you open with diluted. If this poem is not anything, it's not diluted. Pure angst and poetry.

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

THAT WAS A MASS CONSISTENT AMOUNT OF PAIN THAT ALL OF US ARE COMSUMED BY. i admired your fearlesness to express what goes on deep inside of our soul in such a truthful matter

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Wow! What powerful words you have chosen! I think you really stated something here. Great poem!

[Dark Daughters]

A wide range of emotions in a simple a subtle piece, good job!