The World Keeps Moving

The world is moving

around me

I can feel it

but somehow I am

disconnected

From it all

Everything keeps

happening as if

everything is fine

When it's not

It's a unique feeling

To live outside my body

I'll think I'll

stay here for

a little while.

Reviews

[Elena]

You have typoed 'somehow' in your fourth line.

This poem is a little bit dizzying to read. I can appreciate the sentiment, however it is confusing at times. I think you meant 'happening as if'.