Empty Love

And through my words I bleed...

To love when there is nothing left,
Is the worse gift.
When the person you thought would stay, leaves.
And yet each night
For their safety you still pray
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They promised to love
For now and always
It's funny how for him, so easy it became
To break all vows and walk away.

Reviews

[Falcon1]

I soulfully agree this is empty love and you should stay away from such a love.

[Ash]

Indeed. Thank you for reviewing.

[Barbara Borel]

beautiful... lonely and sad

[Ash]

Thank you.

[Life's Imagery In Time]

Beautifully written... short, but filled with so much emotion and what I feel a deeper meaning then what the words say.

[Ash]

Thank you!
There is. I guess that is the beauty of words, they reveal so much and yet so little! :)

[ajelly]

You said so much on these few lines ... Inspired by pain, like much great works. Great piece condensed.

[Ash]

Thank you. This means a lot ❤

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I like this it's direct and well written even with brevity. Cheers Starz

[Ash]

Thank you ❤