Roses Bleed

Roses are red

Violets are blue

I wish I could tell you

How much I love you

 

Blood is red

The sky is blue

My empty heart

Cries out for you

 

Roses are red

Violets are blue

I need to know

If you love me, too

 

Blood is red

The sky is blue

I know I shouldn’t feel this way

But I do

 

Roses are red

Violets are blue

I couldn’t help myself

I fell in love with you

Reviews

[blegh]

yeah i fell in love with "you know who" and it hurts... really bad,,,,

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I loved it

[Asilem]

Thank you. :)

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welcome

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. :) Great job on the repetition. ^_^

[Asilem]

Thank you!

[Grant P.]

This poem has a good feel to it and I like how you used an old-school "violets are blue, roses are red" and then tied in your rhymes. I wonder who inspired you to write this. Keep up the good work.

[Asilem]

Thank you!

[Asilem]

And to answer your wondering, I wrote it from the point of view of a character from this book I read