If You Were Here

Come and listen, come and see

I wish you were here with me

I have so much to show, so much to tell

If you were here, all would be well

 

Everything will be okay, everything will be alright

I know I could make it through the night

If you were holding me, if you were here

I would have nothing to fear

 

I have so much to say

A billion words that would fill up a day

The feelings I have will never sever

I would tell you that I'll love you forever

Author's Note

We're starting our poetry units in English and in my Creative Writing Exporation class. This is what I came up with from our prompts.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire and the emotion of this poem. Good to know love and want to share love. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[blegh]

awww

[Night]

...i thought this poem rocked...smooth and bright with just the right amount of verses...cleverly done...Nice...=)

[Asilem]

Thank you very much. :)

[Night]

you are very welcome...=)

[Summer]

Original and refreshing. I hope you got an A for a grade?

[Asilem]

Thanks. I hope I do too. :)