War and Peace

Constantly at war, constantly at peace
Will I ever have the feeling of sweet release?
You keep me on the edge, you keep me at bay
Please let me go, I couldn't last another day.

You're constantly above, constantly aware
Aware of my feelings, aware of my moves
You match them with yours, you match them with kisses
You hold me so close, a love so delicious.

Author's Note

Thanks you to Night for the last line. :) It really... completes the poem.

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I can think of no other activity that is so gentle and yet so rough at the same time...this piece really captures that parallel :)

[Asilem]

Thanks for catching on! I was starting to think that no one really understood what it was about....

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime love can seem like war and peace. I like the title and the set-up of the poem. A strong closing to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Asilem]

Thank you. :)

[Night]

"You hold me so close, a love so delicious"...=) Sweet write, nice rhyme and flow...superb message...=)

[Asilem]

Thank you for your help. :) And for the review.

[Night]

You're welcome...=)

[blegh]

cool ;D i like the rhyming pattern

[Asilem]

Thanks. :)