Fifty

a poem about Fifty Shades

You're dangerous.
You scare me
with your rapid mood swings
My dear Fifty Shades of Fucked Up

Like a drug
I need you to survive
I need you
With all of your kinky fuckery

You are my soul mate
You make me happy
You make me feel complete
You're my Fifty Shades of Grey

Author's Note

I just wrote it. *shrug* I hope you like it.

Reviews

[Lucien Maier]

nice flow. good word choice. Although the references to 50 shades of gray is a bit taxing. This piece is yours however, by throwing the 50 shades reference you are pulling away from your piece to add steam to the 50 shades.
Other than that it put together very well.

[blegh]

LOL cool

[Coyote Poetry]

We must take the good of bad of another person. I like the way you balanced the thoughts in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Trigorin]

Somewhat exaggerated, but it's poetry - you can't get away from that. If it was me, I'd keep away from the references to Fifty Shades and instead write about something more interesting or worthwhile, but as it is, the poem has merit based on the decent imagery you use. The whole thing conjures up a sort of brief insanity in my opinion - after all, the narrator is addressing a book, and refers to it as her soul mate. Your work would be much less restricted if you wrote about something less specific.