As I Know

The hotter I burn 

the more her flame tends to heat, 

as my desirable climax tends to grow 

I cant help but notice that Im approach her peak

Ambitions becoming desires 

that I know my inner-being can reach

In the meanwhile my hearts in flurry, 

letting her know that im hers to keep

Nevermore have I been reassured about the thoughts that my oblivious conscience holds

Reviews

[Avinash]

The rituals of love has final offerings for the female. There is a spiritual element to your poem. Men are irresistible to women when they are vulnerable and strong both at the same time, aptly reflected in your poem.

[KK]

You always tend to capture exactly what I portray in my poetry. Thanks man. Your pretty awesome for that

[Avinash]

My pleasure