I hate how you never have an answer, Leaving me asking again and again And again. It's always "I don't think so," Or "maybe next time." Well, the chocolates have gone bad, And the lilies have died. I'm beginning to see, now, After my suspicions. And, I think, after all of this time, The adoration inside of me Has also died.
This is emotional but not extremely so. I like the way the ending lines the most. Although it sure does piss you off when 'someone' gives you indefinite answers, after a while of it you just say "Give me an actual answer." I don't really know what to say to this to be honest. Good write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
13 Years Ago
Oh, it angers and frustrates me to no end! If people don't want to do something, they should just sa.. read moreOh, it angers and frustrates me to no end! If people don't want to do something, they should just say so, especially when it comes to "romance". While I can get the hint now, I can understand how other people can't..... a direct answer, no matter how tough, is ultimately better than a trillion "maybes".
This is emotional but not extremely so. I like the way the ending lines the most. Although it sure does piss you off when 'someone' gives you indefinite answers, after a while of it you just say "Give me an actual answer." I don't really know what to say to this to be honest. Good write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
13 Years Ago
Oh, it angers and frustrates me to no end! If people don't want to do something, they should just sa.. read moreOh, it angers and frustrates me to no end! If people don't want to do something, they should just say so, especially when it comes to "romance". While I can get the hint now, I can understand how other people can't..... a direct answer, no matter how tough, is ultimately better than a trillion "maybes".
"Behold her, single in the field,
Yon solitary Highland Lass!
Reaping and singing by herself;
Stop here, or gently pass!
Alone she cuts and binds the grain,
And sings a melancho.. more..