Words

Words

A Poem by grayscale

If only words could speak my mind, 
of friends I've lost
of tales unkind,
the warming breaths of summer bind
the choke of winter,
for even seasons beauty cannot enter,
for the ashes in minds ember,
if only words could speak my mind,
the fatal fire ,
would then unwind.

© 2017 grayscale


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captivating write. Short and sharp..nice usage of words in "the ashes in minds ember".

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is smooth and beautiful, Grayscale.
Nice flow

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 grayscale

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
A good poem that this is 👍

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely stunning, keep up the great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eloquently written, my friend. It's short but meaningful with a sense of... Passion?

Overall quite good despite its length.

Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think your words can, they did, but the end indicates that your words do too well. i like

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 grayscale
grayscale

Chillicothe, OH



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