Courtesy Iris

If there were such a fine line between love... And other things.

A palpable chill

I reach out and feel

Your heart on your sleeve

And mine at your heels

A cold silver flower

In a spring shower

Won't hurt me much less

When I'm still so much lower

Than you.

Would it be too late

When I stop feeling pain?

Slice me in half, then

If I didn't so hate

You.

If I didn't so love

You.

Author's Note

If you noticed, I didn't tag this as "romance," but rather, "love." This poem is based off the colaboration novel my friend just completed TODAY. *whoot* We're planning to get it published, and with both of us working together, I think it could be publish-worthy. :D

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

Pretty! the imagery lines were my favorite

[:-)]

Thank you!

[Emunah June.]

Awww! This is both saddening and somewhat heartwarming. I really enjoyed it :)

[:-)]

Thanks so much!