Secret of a Life

I was inspired by the shakespearian word magnents :)

 

The Secret of a Life

Farewell my ghost,
  To quench winter in thy torment.
O'er the white hills of my homeland
  and remnants of my childhood past.

Yonder our fates await,
    Loathsome woe questions only what is me;
A sea of quivering darkness is just
    what it appears to be.

How'er long is take, I will wait as
    the heart unfolds, enveloped in madness.
Thou may ne'er know of the secrets
    that lie hidden there.

For I can ne'er tell; that would be
    Where my soul lay.
At the bottom of the ocean
    Where it bleeds and is locked away.

Reviews

[Blue Sky]

A very deep piece swaying
yet in theShakesperian style
I was totally embellished
with the wonderful elegant style
that flows quiet ambiently.
So beautifully written!!

[Billy Baphomet]

Wow baby, this is beautiful. Is this new, I don't think I have ever read this one by you. Well done. . .blew me away.