Two Shoes of Diffrent Leather

discribing my thoughts

As I lie there mentally aching,

My mind slowly breaking

 

 

I curl into my little ball,

Seeing us walking down the hall

 

 

We have all been fighting,

I see our paths a’ parting

 

 

I know all these men but which is I,

Just which will lead me too the light

 

 

The middle ground of the two

Is the one I shall choose,

For it shines the light apon the two

 

 

The middle path I shall choose,

Forcing me to wear both shoes

 

 

Though my mind its coming to ease,

I know I can never leave the two which is me

Author's Note

let me kno what u think its my first peice on a long journey of word art

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like it. :)
It is a great poem.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is a very good piece:)... i like it. A good first piece

[X]

truly great man. i like it.
keep this up. you seem to have a great talent that you need to take advantage of.

[LeeLee Ryder]

Love the opening line... It's sets the tone for this wonderful soul searching poem...
Continue on your path HIp...
LLR

[Katie]

This was a really deep write. "I know all these men but which is I, just which lead me too the light" This sentence gave me goosebumps! You have a way with wording things that make even the dark seem not so bad. Great job.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Ah the idea of duality is always interesting ..I like it..as it is something we all have to look at in our lives ..it harkens back to the famous
Robert Frost Poem
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference. 20

[The Last Poetic King]

Very nice bro, people who have a small mind wont understand.
People who are into darker things will.
Give people time, and some will start realizing what is going on in this piece.
Keep writing your s**t down on paper, or internet.
I use the internet, cause I can hardly read my own hand writing.
But whatever works for you.

[Rachel Elizabeth]

This is a little confusing at first, but it's got a really good message behind it. For a first piece, it's really good.
Keep writing. I would love to read more.
Hearts from Bubbles.