Creatures

just a lesson i decided to show some people

a creature of evil grows inside of me
he is corrupted, full of hate, anger, and misery
he feeds on the energy of another
but just one part of me is him
for there is another
one who feeds on helping others
he is a creature of good, of the light
these creatures are in a constant fight
just who will win in their struggles
why it all leads to choice
the choice of who i decide to feed

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing and intense poem. I love it.

[Moth Phoenix]

Intense poem :]
Great job love it!!!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet! I love this story.

[Myk Malice]

ahhh, the duality of man. the dark side is from my experience the hungrier.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is really good. i'm thinking we all have a good and a dark side, do we not?

[Jason Knight]

Good work. A good reflection of the inner struggles of the creatures we call humans. This actually inspired me to write something, so thanks.
~Jason K.

[Eye0fthebeh0lder]

This is an interesting concept. I've noticed that a lot of your poems reflect human nature in interesting ways. Good work.

[Smitten Drive]

I beleive this poem describes not only what boils deep within yourself, but also a common fight that most have to deal with these days. Well done.

[Sofia N]

hmmm really interesting and really nice, I loved it..great job :)

[Lilly]

Interesting poem - I suppose everyone has two sides and sometimes it is a struggle to choose who you really are.
Nice work.