Butterflies

eh

You make the butterflies fly high

When you just say hi

You bring a tear to my eye

When you have to say goodbye

A thought of you makes my stomach turn

And for you is who I yearn

I beg to see your cute smile everyday

One day I hope I may

Just to kiss your lips

While I hold your hips

Would give me the perfect day

For I love you is all I can say

Author's Note

yep

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The gentle description and the hope of a sweet kiss and holding a woman. Ain't no better poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Moth Phoenix]

babe i read it again and it made me smile and tear up ^_^
i love u so much!!!! :D

[Mithridate]

that's how i feel about someone :) awesome peom, i could relate

[Jon]

Good flow and packed with emotion, great job..

[Jessica]

This is so cute. I can see and feel your emotions in your words. Great job!

[c.m.]

This is soooo sweet! Any girl would be very lucky for this to be about her. Wonderful job.

[Keevan]

very sweet and nicely written. wonderful job =-)

[Lilly]

Such a sweet poem. Great work :)

[Nameless]

Good rhyming. It's really good for it's a love poem. Good job.

[Moth Phoenix]

Awwwwwwwww ^_^
I love this one!! Hmmm lemme take a minute to guess who this is about...... alright got it in my head hehehe :]]
Great job!!

I like,
Just to kiss your lips
While I hold your hips

:]