Daddy Long Leg

daddy long leg 2 quarters round
crawling round like he owns the town
on my wall he is for sure
walking around like he rules the world
so smack him with my art i must
and on my notebook lay his guts
but stuck to the wall squished and all
i write to thee in my form of apology
you were a gift that i smacked down
you coulda smacked this fly outa town
so i must say im sorry
we coulda been close friends




It happened i killed him and i feel sorry

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a good poem. I think it's good. Thanks for sharing.

[HorrorMaster]

Very good poem

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Its surprising how fear of what we dont understand can cause us to just lash out.
I really liked this poem. We all regret things in life. Hindsight is always 20/20.

[victoria]

awww this is so sad, i always feel really bad after killing bugs so i never do. lol but i like the idea of it, you got it through really well. great write :D

[Lilly]

Cute poem - this made me smile to read this - I love the sincerity implied here through your words because most people wouldn't give a little spider a second thought.

[Moth Phoenix]

So this is the spider you squished while on the phone?? Im no fan of spiders but this was really cute babe :] I'm sure the spider accepts your apology for squishing it!!