Live it Through

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We all need to live

We all need to die

We all must suffer

Then take flight

 

Times a lie that just flies by

But what if it flies too high

Out of conscious perception we all die

For with no perception there is no life

 

It will all end but its alright

Just cruise the ride and ride the high

Live life the way you want to

Preserve to keep all life in drive

Author's Note

if you got a name for it gimme an idea

Reviews

[Smitten Drive]

Perhaps..."The Honest Truth"?

[Ebb and Flow]

I would simply title it "Life." It is well written and true.

Krys

[HorrorMaster]

An outstanding poem

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I could imagine pulling these lyrics from an old dusty shoebox. The words come from a true free spirit. It let my imagination drift away..but also put my brain to work. You have collected some inspiring thoughts. Nice Job!

[Moth Phoenix]

its interesting and i like it a lot

[Jessica]

Good poem, but a couple of things,
*But what if it flies to high (too?)
*Just cruise the ride and rid the high (ride?)
and experiment with punctuation. It'd help your writing a lot. But really good poem :)