Hearts By Twine

a picture i drew of two hearts that are sewn together and i added this poem to it, ima trying get the picture on here soon

Together they bled

Held together by thread

Memorys as twine

Helped them combine

Love sewn them through

The darkest of blue

Holding together their heart

Making this beautiful art

Where together they'll be

Sewn by love for eternity

Author's Note

it rhymes a lot i know but with the picture it makes more sense and heart is not to have an s at the end, u see the picture itd make sense

Reviews

[Lilly]

Heavy rhyme that works to tell a nice story
picture is very cool

[The Last Poetic King]

The picture is bad a*s. I like the poem too, but the picture is great bro.

[TransparentHearts]

Beautiful write (:

[Alicia Schroeder]

it is beautiful, I like it

[HorrorMaster]

Pretty good

[Eye0fthebeh0lder]

This is pretty good even without the picture. I can't wait to see the full product. :)

[Moth Phoenix]

Babe it's a wonderful poem. I really want to see this picture that u have created, it sounds loverly ((:

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I really thought you did a good job with the flow. Great job on the poem. Thanks for sharing. :)