Embrace the World

Embrace the World

A Poem by Austin Skye Elsborg

Embrace the world 
And feel so free
Grab hold of my hand and stay with me
Embrace the world 
Here we will stay
Embrace the world 
For it was never meant to be this way

© 2012 Austin Skye Elsborg


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Austin Skye Elsborg
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Honestly, this one doesn't work for me. I don't get a sense of emotions from this one, no sadness or happiness or humor or anything. There's also no story or sense of something being told, no perspective or idea being conveyed, it's just lines of statements put together. You're other writing is really full of emotion and/or ideas, and thus a lot better than this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Austin Skye Elsborg

13 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback! I think I can see what you mean and where you are coming from. I'll keep th.. read more



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Honestly, this one doesn't work for me. I don't get a sense of emotions from this one, no sadness or happiness or humor or anything. There's also no story or sense of something being told, no perspective or idea being conveyed, it's just lines of statements put together. You're other writing is really full of emotion and/or ideas, and thus a lot better than this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Austin Skye Elsborg

13 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback! I think I can see what you mean and where you are coming from. I'll keep th.. read more

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I never realize just how much of me I put into my writing until I reread it all. Then I know, and it's much more then I thought. more..