Fun

a short poem

It's fun in the sun
The day has just begun
Eat a hot-dog in a bun
Let's have a a contest, hey, I won!

Author's Note

too short, though. i hope you likes it

Reviews

[lauren emily]

I like this..Short, funny, and cute :D Very nice work,
~Lauren

[Sseoni]

I really liked this! It was cute and had a great rhyme scheme! :D

[RunsWithCats]

That was definitely fun to read! Very fun...lol -God Bless XD

[ebur™]

dude, this poem just made my day! ;) i don't care if it was short, it was freaking fun to read. Thanks for sharing it! :)

[lawrence bear]

lol, cute, and fun, liked it.

[Cassandra D.]

lol, this was short and cute!
I liked it!

[Jen Marks]

LOL, I love this!! :D
Who cares if it's short?
It's meant to be like that!

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♥Jen Marks