My Forever

My Forever I met

on a cold winter's night

My Forever I met

in a festive forest

My Forever I met

under the night sky

Under the winds of chance,

Under the waves of love

My Forever I met by fate

at the wrong time,

but at the right time

My Forever I met

forever ago & I'm just

now saying Hi.

Author's Note

This poem just came out of the blue and inspired me. I hope you enjoyed it. If so, leave me a critique below with what I could have done better with this. Thanks for reading!

Reviews

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Hmmm....that's bit blue to feel...but I enjoyed... :)

Few lines are penned heartedly here I feel... that 5th stanza is so correct! The right time is when that forever comes in our life....this novice loved reading it and so no critiques I could decide.....be happy foreva!

Thanks for sharing sir :)

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you Tahsin.Z!

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Heartedly welcome :)

[Jordan Smith]

Also, you have a beautiful smile :)

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Oh, thanks a lot!!☺

[Jordan Smith]

You're welcome :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

This poem charms with its simplicity and romance. I felt a shy and endearing touch to it...

[Jordan Smith]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! This is one of my favorites

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Indeed a pleasure!

[Amy R]

Nice poem,
I love the last stanza the most! :)

[Jordan Smith]

I'm glad you liked it!

[Amy R]

A warm welcome.

[wredit.jordan]

Aw... The last stanza is my favorite.

[Jordan Smith]

It's my favorite also haha thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

[sette]

it is one sad poem... but then as skeptical as i am i don't believe in forever

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Wonderful- I felt like you were speaking to yourself sometimes we mirror that which we actually seek- wonderful forever and always🌹

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you for the review! I am glad that you enjoyed it!