Sorry Mom

This is for a story Chara. of mine~

Hey, it’s me mom…
Sorry I’ve been gone,
I’m in the storms calm,
Sorry it’s been so long.

Time slipped passed me,
I got lost in life so fast,
I’m here on my knees…
I hate all the time that passed.

Mother, I’m sorry,
I brought flowers,
The night is starry,
This is the way you like, just ours.

The scent of dirt,
The taste of cold,
I feel so inert,
Your tombstone has gotten old.

Its been years since you left,
It was pouring rain that night
It was a very painful death,
But you sure put up a fight.

I miss you,
With so much love,
With all we’ve gone through,
I bet you having fun above…

With love, your Son.

Reviews

[Brandon Dunbar]

I like this piece quite a bit. Alot of feeling as well as great flow. Great Job.